The beautiful moment – 55 Fiction

 His hands were shivering when he took her in his arms. She was looking like an angel. Gently, he kissed her. That was their first meet, for which he was desperately waiting, and wanted the moment to stay.

Suddenly, his mom entered. She approached them with filled eyes.

“She looks just like you,” she rejoiced.


11 thoughts on “The beautiful moment – 55 Fiction

  1. Haaaaaa….. Awesume…. It was a suspense… the title as well maintained the suspense… mmmm…….Gud job !!!!! Perfect

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